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  • ✍🏼 I might use this instead of battleuniverse.co for my book log. We’ll see. Going to tinker for a bit more around this idea. I like how you can reply to posts and such.

    → 5:02 PM, May 2
  • 10.07.FR

    Hello everyone! You may notice I havent written in a while! That is due to a shift in priorities at Hi5 studios. The corona virus has de-stabilized us and were working to stabilize our company this quarter (next three months). After that, I will re-assess and hopefully resume my writing journey! Love you all!

    → 4:04 PM, Jul 10
  • 09.06.MO

    - Write 1k Words

    Wrote more of the same scene. My scenes are kind of long and they are filled with a lot of dialogue but I do believe its necessary based on the mystery afoot. It’s an enormous mystery with so many questions that need to be answered along the way. I honestly wonder if they are long enough sometimes to make sure readers aren’t too much in the dark.
    Listen to a master class yesterday that might help with the idea of longer scenes. Dan Brown talked about the nature of location and how it can do the ‘heavy lifting’. In other words a scene in the right place adds tension that wouldn’t be there otherwise, something for me to think about to keep the scenes moving that are more ‘talking heads’.

    → 8:41 AM, Jun 9
  • 08.06.MO

    - Write 1k Words

    Had fun writing this morning. I enjoy writing the sequel reaction scenes where characters converse about clues. Something cozy about it. There are a healthy amount of those moments in this book, possibly too many.

    → 8:39 AM, Jun 8
  • 06.06.SA

    - Write 1k Words

    Bit of a tough week writing. Doing my best to avoid burnout coming back to work, so many emotions in the world what with the movement and all, and honestly a sleep schedule that needs to be rectified. Trying to get back on track here without burning out. Back in it today.

    → 12:30 PM, Jun 6
  • 03.06.TU

    - Write 500 Words

    • Writing next reaction scene, after this next reaction scene I am starting ACT 2B! Excited to be pushing into the more proactive steps for the hero.
    → 8:08 AM, Jun 2
  • 01.06.MO

    - Write 1k Words

    → 1:19 PM, Jun 1
  • 31.05.SU

    - Write 1k Words

    → 1:19 PM, May 31
  • 29.05.FR

    - Write 1k Words

    → 1:18 PM, May 29
  • 28.05.TH

    - Write 1k Words

    • Finished that difficult scene, onto the next!
    • This next scene is action packed with conflict so It is going to be a joy to write.
    • Also introducing new characters!
    → 8:26 AM, May 28
  • 25.05.TU

    * Write 1k words

    • Still writing the midpoint scene, couple more sessions to finish it up.

    → 8:17 AM, May 27
  • 23.05.SA

    * Write 1k words

    • Still writing the midpoint scene, this is taking forever.
    → 2:29 PM, May 23
  • 21.05.TH

    * Brainstorm New Series Ideas

    • Excited! Brainstormed a lot of the main points for the new series, I believe I also have a name to tease a bit ‘Higher Realm Hunters’!
    • Created a Nolt board (will only be up for 9 days) to help collect some ideas for the artifacts the hunters are seeking! Click below, no login needed!

    View Board, submit, and vote!

    → 9:26 AM, May 21
  • 20.05.WE

    * Write 1k Words

    → 9:25 AM, May 20
  • 19.05.TU

    * Write 1k Words

    * Finish sketching complicated midpoint scene

    ➤ Next Steps

    • Write the midpoint scene.
    • Map out basics of [/redact] scene! Excited for this one.
    → 10:50 AM, May 19
  • 18.05.MO

    * Continue Mapping Midpoint scene

    ➤ Next Steps

    • Continue midpoint scene mapping, its a big scene ok.
    → 11:12 AM, May 18
  • 17.05.SU

    * Map out midpoint scene

    ➤ Next Steps

    * Continue to map out scene

    → 11:10 AM, May 17
  • 15.05.FR

    * Two Minute Rule

    * Write 1k Words

    * Finish Chant Revelation Scene

    Had some great ideas for the writing series I am planning to undertake. Story ideas, themes, etc. My brain doesn’t want to start writing though from the ‘pantser’ strategy. I feel like my work loses meaning when there isn’t at least some preliminary direction to where I am headed. I don’t think I need to plan out every little beat, as that takes the fun out of it. I believe there should be a healthy mix of planning and writing off the cuff. Direction and exploration, thinking and feeling. One should not dominate the other. So in order to do that, there needs to be a relatively simple planning phase where I map out at least the climax and midpoint and maybe some other major beats like plot and pinch. I can find my way in realtime after that. Onto writing now!

    For clarity, when I set a goal of writing 1k words, any words I write across my manuscript or notes are counted. This is to reduce the emotional burden I feel when figuring out some complex story problems that have to be figured out before I proceed in the manuscript. As long as I am writing, I count it. I only write notes though when I’m blocked in the manuscript. However, if I have extra time (usually I only have an hour a day) I will get to the 1k words goal in the manuscript. To do this have have two word counters, one that lives in the menu bar of the Mac that tracks all words across my Mac, the other in Scrivenr that only tracks the manuscript.

    I tend to have three documents open while writing. Front and center, the manuscript, to the left, this log, and to the right my notes. The log and notes each serve a purpose, dump out the problems, solve them, and get back into the manuscript. The log lets me keep writing but get out the distractions, the notes allow me to keep writing by solving dialogue or sequential issues of pacing. The less I judge myself for not writing in the manuscript, the more I actually get written in the manuscript.

    ➤ Next Steps

    • Rylen uncovers [/redact]
    • It keeps calling, he realizes his [/redact]
    • Rylen attaches it, and [/redact]
    • Resume from notes
    → 9:17 AM, May 15
  • 14.05.TH

    * 2 Minute Rule

    * Write 1k Words

    * Start writing next scene with Jax

    • Writing in the morning is a bit tough because my brain wants to go into work mode. But I also know myself enough to know that if I wait until the evening there might be so many things to tackle that I tell myself writing isn’t a priority. The issue is that can never be true unless there is something truly urgent. There is rarely something truly urgent that cannot wait, but more importantly the feeling that something is truly urgent that distracts. Then the need to solve that problem to dispel the negative energy. I want to get in the habit of moving toward that discomfort of working on something important even when I feel other things are urgent. This will help me grow in my ability to sit with pain and be uncomfortable. The trick is not judging myself when I fail.
    • As far as story goes, had some thoughts last night about where I can take this next scene. Browsing instagram last night got some inspiration reading various accounts centered around poetry. Something I definitely want my first pass over my manuscript to encompass. I want the writing to be a bit more poetic. Realism is good and all, but I live in reality, I read to escape it. On with it!

    ➤ Next Steps

    • Finish scene as quick as possible to talk about the chant
    • Move onto him sleeping and being woken up by [/redact].
    • Then [/redact].
    → 8:52 AM, May 14
  • 13.05.WE

    * Organize Story Notes

    * Brainstorm three short stories

    * Start mapping beats

    • No need to do the two minute rule as my brain is yearning to get into the story ideas I have.
    • It's unreal how many notes I have. I could spend an entire work week attempting to sort my notes. I won't get that crazy with it, but wow.
    • Brainstormed some short story ideas.
    • The reason I am brainstorming short story ideas is because I want to write a short story in the Battle Universe that I can release now, so I can start to bring people into this universe I am creative. It is a bit lonely creative it all on my own right now. My thoughts is that If I commit one day out of the 6 days I write a week, then I should be able to (soon) start writing about 1k words per week in this universe that I can release soon.
    • The idea is to release it in 1k word increments with some amazing art from Lovans, an amazing Hi5 artist.
    • This way I am still fully committed to my bigger story, and I can bring people along in the process in a way thats more immersive than this log, or other 'teasers' for years before I release the book.

    ➤ Next Steps

    • Next Session for mini series will include committing to a story and then mapping it out.
    • Next session (tomorrow) for my main story is to continue from 12.05.TU
    → 8:21 AM, May 13
  • 12.05.TU

    Latest count: 120,074 words - 509 pages

    * Write 1k Words

    * Continue reaction sequel

    * Two Minute Technique

    • The two minute rule by Merlin Mann is an idea that before you get to work you write whatever is on your mind for two minutes straight to get into the process of writing. Doesn’t matter what you write so long as you keep writing for two minutes. I would normally spare you of this stream of consciousness in this log as it will most likely be extremely redundant and insipid, but that’s the natural of a daily log, is it not?
    • Right now getting caught a bit with distraction and I want to refocus my attention. The past couple days since I have had some extra time to work my process of starting up is pretty slow. I also weight lifted (leg day) so I’m a bit foggy as is right now. My brain has latched onto perfecting my productivity system instead of doing actual work (Actual work is difficult), pretending to work is fun. Either way, here I am, starting up, getting the process flow.
    • Right now working on the rest of the sequel scene to the midpoint battle. The next scene I’m worried about cramming. My ‘sequel’ scenes, or reaction scenes are always instantly crammed with dialogue to cover revelations, information, and necessary progression of character motivated plot. Seems to be a bit difficult to get all the points out in a succinct way, but Ill worry more about that in the edit. My ‘scene’ scene (action scene [Got to love Dwight Swain’s naming logic]) before this sequel was 5k words. So under 5k for the sequel will set a nice quick moving pace. Anything over 5k might drag the story a bit. Luckily the following action scene is exciting.
    • Create Writing Routine as follows
      • Create Log
      • Review yesterdays writing.
      • Set 3 minute timer
      • Brain dump for 3 minute
      • Set 1 hour timer.
      • Write
      • Finish Log.
      • Upload log.

    ➤ Next Steps

    • Pilot says he can’t move forward because [/redact]
    • They get out, and walk through the [/redact]
    • Set up and beat map return to Jax scene
    • Create Writing routine in ‘Things’

    → 9:44 AM, May 12
  • 10.05.SU

    * Write 500 words (Wrote 839)

    * Organize End of battle scene

    • Amanda left to go for an outing, kids are asleep. Writing feels fun right now. Wouldn’t write today if it didn’t (sabbath), and wouldn’t write if she was home (mothers day).
    • Exciting to be working on death/rebirth scene (midpoint), this kind of conflict is always bigger and much more fun to write. ‘This kind of conflict’ meaning conflict in which you have large and much much more noticeable shifts in perspective for the key character. A bit difficult to sustain a cohesive and believable build up to such points as the midpoint and climax. I do wonder if this point may overshadow the climax or possibly that other points may overshadow these, but I will never know until I get some beta readers. Excited for that phase.
    • Probably overwrote. Not too worried about it. I am writing an ‘epic’. Of course I’m writing it here so I must a least be a little worried about it. Possibly worried about cutting things in the edit. But then again I don’t have any aesthetic scenes, everything is purely functional, at least with my current structure. It’s a given then why I have the fear of cutting what is necessary. I think the bigger more real fear is that I am not being as effective or efficient with how said points flow. In other words, there could be a better way to get across the information in a more succinct way. Doing my best to not limit my thinking in this stage though. Would rather process the thoughts here in this log than be a slave to them in my manuscript.
    ➤ Next Steps
    • Rylen runs to the [/redact] to see [/redact].
    • There are heavy thoughts during the run.
    • Continue with existing outline.

    → 2:49 PM, May 10
  • 09.05.SA

    * Write 1K Words

    - 117,296 Words
    - 1 hour session

    * Finish [/redact] Battle

    • Playing Spotify cinematic playlist to help bring about intensity in my thoughts.
    • Writing intense scene, filled with anger. Noticing a lot of it build up inside me. Honestly need to hit something right now to release it, but Im going to use it instead.

    ➤ Next Steps

    • Rylen has a bit of a panic attack.
    • When he comes to he hears [/redact]
    • His heart sinks for [/redact]
    • Goes back into the greenroom
    → 12:32 PM, May 9
  • 06.05.WE

    * Write 1k Words

    ➤ Next Steps

    • Describe look of arena
    • Rylen uses his anger and speed to [/redact]
    • Knocks [/redact]
    → 12:32 PM, May 6
  • 05.05.TU

    * Write 1k words

    * Continue [/redact] battle scene

    ➤ Next Steps

    • Ranger shoots something and [/redact].
    • He shoots not stopping, unaware the arena is changing.
    • Gets/redact]
    • Just [/redact]left.

    → 12:31 PM, May 5
  • 01.05.FR

    * Write 2k words

    ➤ Next Steps

    • Drift reaches up, but [/redact]
    • Rylen and Kyra fight [/redact]
    • Kyra gets /redact]
    • Guardian [/redact]
    • Arena change is classic arena with an empty center for Rylen and [/redact]
    → 12:31 PM, May 1
  • 30.04.TH

    * Write 1.5k Words
    

    ➤ Next Steps

    • Begin with the battle, Rylen can’t keep them in [/redact]
    • How does he defeat the other team. He needs to [/redact] by the arena.
    → 12:31 PM, Apr 30
  • 29.04.WE

    * Finish scene with Rylen and his new spell

    * Write 1k words.

    ➤ Next Steps

    • Rylen doesn’t have much luck but just a couple clues like warm ground, anger starting to swell but he is too fearful and contains it.
    • Map out beats of [/redact]
    • Then he gets angry at [/redact] it with ease in battle.

    → 12:31 PM, Apr 29
  • 28.04.TU

    • Finish Writing the [/redact] scene
    • Write 2k words

    ➤ Next Steps

    • Rylen annoyed [/redact] is empty
    • Finds its not and [redact]it gives him a spell[/redact]
      • Rylen wakes up from a [redact]call of the raeth[/redact]
    • He follows it to the [/redact]
    • Reveals the same [/redact]
    • He goes outside to [/redact], against his judgement (staying away, getting tired)
    • Battle comes, he [/redact]
    • The [/redact] saves him from [/redact] because he’s [/redact].
    → 12:31 PM, Apr 28
  • 27.04.MO

    Set Up Next Major Scene Beats
    Write 2000 Words
    - Should they prep in some type of locker room and come to the match in regular clothes? Why do they prep at home and travel in battle gear?
    - Wrote the [/redact]. Added X-Spells and how a torch works.

    ➤ Next Steps

    • Finish [/redact]
    • Work on Defining main beats for next scene (learning spell)
    • Map out battle with [/redact] in more detailed structure.
    → 12:31 PM, Apr 27
  • 26.04.SU

    ➤ Next Steps

    • They /redact] because Rylens head isn't in the game
    • Drift says to keep is head out of the clouds and in battle instead of the raeth (hes forgetting its power)
    • Rylen tries to [/redact]just move the scene)
    • the [/redact] so he turns to the [/redact] in the last minute
    • special scene with the [/redact] somehow signifying the [/redact]
    → 12:30 PM, Apr 26
  • 23.04.TH

    • Need to fix first half of second act
      • They need to be searching and discovering clues
      • [/redact] to be making more noise out in the galaxy
        • Privately looking (what does this mean?)
        • Stumbling! Not privately looking, active search relegated to second half after midpoint.
    • Wrote 2k Words
    → 12:26 PM, Apr 23
  • 22.04.WE

    • 2k words
    → 12:26 PM, Apr 22
  • 21.04.TU

    • Cont’ reaction scene after library
    • Wrote Next battle
    • 2k Words
    → 12:26 PM, Apr 21
  • 20.04.MO

    • Wrote Battle Reaction
    • Wrote library scene
    • 2k Words
    → 12:26 PM, Apr 20
  • 19.04.SU

    • Wrote 2k
    → 12:26 PM, Apr 19
  • 18.04.SA

    • Wrote 2k
    → 12:26 PM, Apr 18
  • 17.04.FR

    • Formatting scene
    • Structuring next scene

    ➤ Next Steps

    • Rylen [/redact], gives him a moment to explain his plan to his team
    • Rylen faces [/redact]
    • Line swings back and forth
    → 12:26 PM, Apr 17
  • 16.04.TH

    • Working on next battle
    → 12:26 PM, Apr 16
  • 15.04.WE

    • Buying of [/redact]
    • Wrote 1k words

    ➤ Next steps

    • Next battle with [/redact]
    → 12:26 PM, Apr 15
  • 14.04.TU

    • Finished [/redact] scene
    • Started gear up scene

    ➤ Next steps

    • Look at armor
    • only afford [/redact]
    • Plan their strategy in pub
    • Wrote 1k words
    → 12:26 PM, Apr 14
  • 13.04.MO

    Took a long break from writing. Last session was two weeks ago. Quarantine has been challenging at work and has consumed a bit more attention that I suspected it would. Been a bit obsessive about problem solving and trying to figure out how to keep it all sustainable.

    • Starting a new goal to have 60k more words written by the 15th of May. That’s the date we should be getting back to work at the studio.
    • Added it to my chalk board
    • Wrote 2k words today

    ➤ Start setting up scene/sequel for armor journey

    → 12:26 PM, Apr 13
  • 27.03.FR

    • Testing software for viz data
    • Prep next chapter
    → 12:26 PM, Mar 27
  • 24.03.TU

    • Continuing quest reaction scene
    → 12:26 PM, Mar 24
  • 23.03.MO

    Writing Sequel
    ➤ Next Steps

    • Find place to put the [/redact]
      • He reaches in and feels [/redact]
      • Dumps out on table in front of Jax
    → 12:26 PM, Mar 23
  • 22.03.SU

    Sequel scene to disaster scene / Quest

    • Created battle plot to map out what battles we see and which ones we don’t.
    • Started mapping out sequel

    ➤ Start sketching ‘Gearing Up’

    → 12:26 PM, Mar 22
  • 21.03.SA

    • Continuing Run From [/redact]
      ➤ Arrive at home.
      • Cut to back at Jax
      • Drift [/redact]
      • They talk on the /redact]
      • Rylen doesnt even have the courage to [/redact]
      • Import next beat notes from Airtable
    → 12:26 PM, Mar 21
  • 19.03.TH

    • Continuing the ‘attack’
      • They run [/redact].
      • Find Kyra [/redact]
      • Almost leave
      • Rylen says to wait and leads them back to [/redact].
    → 12:26 PM, Mar 19
  • 12.03.TH

    • Wrote Kyra leaves

    ➤ Next Steps

    • Rylen protects [/redact]
      • Kyra finds her own way
        • Hopping out of reach
      • [/redact] the bottom door.
        • When they're back, Rylen is curious [/redact].
    → 12:26 PM, Mar 12
  • 11.03.WE

    • Continuing Quest
    • Ending towards the [redact]raeth school[/redact].

    ➤ Next Steps

    • Kyra recognizing [/redact].
      • How didn't she see this before?
      • Books
      • She points out the triangle in the center and holds up [/redact].
      • A noise! [/redact]!
      • Kyra moves away to a different room to explore more.
    → 3:21 PM, Mar 11
  • 10.03.TU

    • Continuing Quest
    → 3:20 PM, Mar 10
  • 09.03.MO

    • Writing Quest

    ➤ Cont R&D getting mad at J and then suspecting him of [/redact]. How does he know so much? [/redact]

    → 3:18 PM, Mar 9
  • 28.02.FR

    • Packed day so only transferred some beats.
    • Started setting up dynalist to capture beats
    • Set up formatting

    ➤ Continue previous next step

    → 4:17 PM, Feb 28
  • 27.02.TH

    • Outlined [/redact]
    • Decided to outline on dynalist and not on paper, too difficult and slow.
    • Set up binder for tracking and reference

    ➤ Import outline to dynalist and finish outlining sketch

    → 4:14 PM, Feb 27
  • 26.02.WE

    • No writing today.
    • Printed and laminated tools/guides such as alternatives for 'said' to carry around in BU01
    → 3:58 PM, Feb 26
  • 25.02.TU

    • Wrote 3 pages
      ➤ 'Oh Great' Rylen thinks.
      • Goes off to worry.
      • Before he heads off though, address the outstanding beats.
    → 3:57 PM, Feb 25
  • 24.02.MO

    • Wrote 2.5 pages today.

    ➤ Jax tells him the [/redact] is on the other side of the mountain.

    • Drift wants to know of the danger involved.
    • Jax tells him to [/redact]

    → 4:54 PM, Feb 24
  • 21.02.FR

    BU01

    • Wrote 4 pages today
      ➤ Drift Gains Respect/Awe for Rylen
      • [/redact]
      • Team Starts to trust one another at this point
      • Rylen thinks [/redact]
    → 3:46 PM, Feb 21
  • 20.02.TH

    • Started writing again finally
    • Got over fear of starting. I notice that happens a lot more when I skip days.
    → 3:45 PM, Feb 20
  • 19.02.WE

    • Started writing in a new notebook.
    • Difficult start today, worried how to start, getting in my head a bit.
    • Decided to start by writing chapter I am currently working on.
    • Still unsure this process will yield similar results because writing by hand is a bit more time consuming.
    → 3:43 PM, Feb 19
  • 14.02.FR

    Working on airtable

    • Organized character column with attributes
    → 3:40 PM, Feb 14
  • 11.02.TU

    Airtable

    Working on Airtable
    - Add header tags inside headers
    - Add 'Notes' or 'Beats' tag to header.

    Note Organization

    Text Type Use
    Notes Explanation/Exposition/Information
    Beat An event we see
    Line Written line in story
    Lore Beat we don’t ever ‘see'

    How to Tag

    • Note type
    • Note Place
    • Subject
    • Plot Thread
    • Character

    Tools

    Tool Use
    Airtable World Building / Lore / Story Grid
    Dynalist Event notes
    Scrivener Manuscript / Sketches

    ➤ Organize airtable with world building and export notes

    → 3:08 PM, Feb 11
  • 10.02.MO

    • Imported writing ntoes
    • Imported desk notes
    → 3:07 PM, Feb 10
  • 07.02.FR

    • Added tags to headers
    • Ensure beats have check boxes to mark off
    • Create rules
    • Organize Inbox and import
      ➤ Import desk Notes + Tags
    → 3:04 PM, Feb 7
  • 06.02.TH

    • Remember to write process for writing each chapter/act
      • Go through General Notes.
      • Go through ACT notes.
      • Go through plot point notes.
      • Go through beats.
      • Import all new beats
        ➤ Add tags to header
        ➤ Import Raeth Notes
        ➤ Import Christian Themes
        ➤ Import Desk notes
    → 2:59 PM, Feb 6
  • 05.02.WE

    Continuing organization of existing beats. This is a chore and more work than I anticipated but worth it in the long haul because Im not really writing 'just one book'.

    • In search you dont have to tag everything you can just search the word if needed. Only tag if the word isnt inherent.
    • Finished Org existing notes.
      ➤ Import and organize new dynalist beats (BUN02)
    → 2:56 PM, Feb 5
  • 03.02.MO

    • Forgot to add beat structure to other books.
      • Finished
    • Need identifier tags for quick sorting of existing beats
      • Book 1, ACT 2, Pinch 1 = B1A2PI1
    • Set all Tags for series
      • Finished B1
        ➤ Organize writing beats notes in general
        ➤ Add identifier to headers to quickly transfer notes and events
    → 2:53 PM, Feb 3
  • 01.02.SA

    • Organizing Acts in Airtable Base
    • Reorganizing existing beats in Dynalist.
    • Why aren't tags inherited by header in Dynalist?
    • Always store tags in notes because there is an option to hide them when display gets too busy.
      ➤ From inciting incident
    → 2:44 PM, Feb 1
  • 12.02.WE

    • Import word building notes
    • Importing dynalist #raeth notes to airtable
      ➤ Organize airtable columns w/ inbox column info

    → 4:38 PM, Dec 2
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